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Table 1 Changes to the content and structure of the patient information brochure

From: The effect of optimised patient information materials on recruitment in a lung cancer screening trial: an embedded randomised recruitment trial

Changes to content

Changes to the form and structure

Added NHS Scotland logo to front page

Reduced length from 32 to 30 pages

Shortened ‘foreword’ by 50%, and changed heading to ‘Introduction’

Moved ‘contents’ page from page 4 to page 2, and added trial team contact details at bottom

Changed all but one of the six photographic images to reflect more demographic diversity

Trial team contact details moved from back page to page 27

Added a trial flow chart of the participant pathway in the centre of the booklet

Made contents list clearer and more spread out

Added summary circles of text throughout the booklet

Use of short sentences, plain English, bullet points throughout

New back page, with the same image as front page (map of Scotland) with NHS logo

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